Saturday, March 10, 2012

Feedback please! BK

I changed my idea... I kind of wanted to create a piece about why I want to go into advertising. I ditched the idea of text, but while playing around with creating text forms, I just decided to make an abstract, pieced image of my face. I wanted it to take on an advertisement quality and I was really drawn to the Ray Bans ad that Allie posted up earlier. The color scheme depicts that same pop-art brightness. Sorry if it's kinda blurry.


Any feedback would be great! Thanks! And good luck on finals, everyone :)

2 comments:

  1. I like it but maybe desaturate what ever shapes that aren't your face or hair, cause at first glance I didn't know it was an abstract portrait. It sorta reminds me of those glass artworks found in churches. Dunno if you might try to reduce the number shapes or reduce the white space in-between them. Either way, the image is really cool.

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